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Morning Mist by ehkindred Morning Mist by ehkindred
Alastair wading in the river off the coast of Avigdell, with the watchtower visible in the background.
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AmmoBot-HB Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2016  Student General Artist
The concept and creativity is very nice. The water ripples as well around him are very beautiful and well done so good job on that. The inclusion of the fire does well to draw attention and lead it up to his face which is another strong point. However, what I see as an overall issue with this piece is to do with proportions mainly. The facial proportions can be left up to taste at the end of the day depending on your aim but at the moment they seem to vertically long which makes his face a bit too exaggerated. If you were aiming for a realistic rendition the eyes should definitely come down along the face as right now he doesn't have much forehead. Another area to take note of is how the upper arm comes down into the forearm and hand. The hand/wrist and forearm seem to be a bit too small for his body proportions which makes it look frail. This is also partly due to the way the cloth on the bicep stretches back into the shirt. It makes the bicep look a lot bigger than it actually is underneath which also helps feed the illusion of the small forearm.
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ehkindred Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I really appreciate all the thorough comments. :) I do tend to stylize faces and anatomy a bit, but I still strive for mostly-realistic forms, so thanks for pointing out the places that stretch believability.
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seralune Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2015  Professional Artisan Crafter
Very beautiful pic! :la:
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ehkindred Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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Kaya-STrissa Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015
Fantastic colour work!
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ehkindred Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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